长辛点铁路中学 王雅芳

上海龙凤1314Type of lesson：integrating skills（reading and writing）

上海龙凤1314Teaching aims：

1． Understand the text

2． Learn how to write a description of a place

Teaching aids: writing material,computer

Teaching Procedures

上海龙凤1314StepⅠ：Leading－in

Ask the Ss to look at the picture and ask them the following questions：

―――What can you see in the picture？(the cathedral)

上海龙凤1314―――Where is it ？(in Salisbury)

上海龙凤1314―――Which country does the city belong to?(England)

StepⅡ：Reading

1． Ask the Ss to read the text and then answer the following questions：

1） What do we see in the landscape around Salisbury？

上海龙凤13142） What historical and cultural relics can be found around the city？

3） What can we see in the city？

4） How do the people live and work？

5） What does the landscape in the suburbs of Salisbury look like？

2． Discussion：What did the author write in each of his paragraph？

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StepⅢ：Writing

1． Pre－writing

Ask the Ss to discuss how to describe a place

Give them some information：

上海龙凤13142．While－writing

Ask the Ss to write a passage by answering the questions

1） where is your hometown？（south－east of China）

2） is it big？ How many people are there in your hometown？（no，a small city， a population of about 200，000）

3） are there any historical relics in the city？（yes，a temple built in Ming Dynasty）

4） what is the main industry in the city？（soap industry）

上海龙凤13145） What do you think of the people in the city？（warm，friendly）

6） What is in the wild beautiful countryside near the city ？（many hills and streams）

7） How do you find your hometown？

3． Post－writing

上海龙凤1314In this step,help the Ss realize that self-evaluation is very important, and at the same time tell them how to do the self-evaluation

Ask the students to evaluate their passage according to the following points and make necessary corrections

1) Are the punctuation and capitalization correct?

上海龙凤13142) Is the spelling correct?

上海龙凤13143) Are there any grammatical structures you need to improve?

(tense,voice,sentence structure)

4) Is it well organized?(conjunctions)

上海龙凤13145) Are your ideas expressed clearly?(the usage of the verb)

6) Do you write in complete sentence?

上海龙凤1314Key points Grammar: Language:

( )sentence1

( )sentence 2

( )sentence 3

上海龙凤1314( )sentence4

( )sentence 5 ( )capitalization

上海龙凤1314( ) Spelling

( ) Punctuation

( ) Tense ( )词汇准确

( )句式正确

( )逻辑清晰

Ask the students to do peer-evaluation

上海龙凤1314Key points Grammar: Language:

( )sentence1

( )sentence 2

上海龙凤1314( )sentence 3

( )sentence4

( )sentence 5 ( )capitalization

( ) Spelling

上海龙凤1314( ) Punctuation

( ) Tense ( )词汇准确

( )句式正确

( )逻辑清晰

Ask the students to do class-evaluation

上海龙凤1314（Choose one of the students’s writing）

上海龙凤1314Key points Grammar: Language:

( )sentence1

( )sentence 2

上海龙凤1314( )sentence 3

( )sentence4

上海龙凤1314( )sentence 5 ( )capitalization

上海龙凤1314( ) Spelling

上海龙凤1314( ) Punctuation

( ) Tense ( )词汇准确

( )句式正确

( )逻辑清晰

上海龙凤1314One possible version：

My hometown lie in the south－east of China. It is a small city, with a population of about 2000,000 people.

In the city ,there is a temple built in Ming Dynasty .The main industry is soap industry. And the people are warm and friendly. There are many hills and streams in the wild beautiful countryside near the city.

上海龙凤1314My hometown has a blue sky, green water and a bright future, she is a charming city, I love my hometown.

4).Conclusion

Ask the Ss to list the main sentence structure that can be used to describe a place and people

上海龙凤1314lie in/on/to be in/on/to there be

bewarm/friendly/kind/hardworking/generous/ nice/pleasant/honest/independent/easy-going/brave/optimistic…

上海龙凤1314StepⅤ: homework

上海龙凤1314Ask the Ss to write a passage about their own hometown